I look around, i see no one..
Feeling scared and undone..
Just when the tears
were about to flow,
You come ahead and
things change in a go...
The dark clouds part,
and the sun suddenly
comes out to shine..
As your fingers get in the
spaces between mine...

Pretty romance <3
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DeleteSigh. I miss that feeling.
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