I don't wish for a fairy tale....

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Neither the red roses,
nor the candle light..
No popping of the bubbly
on a moonlit night..
I don't live on the rainbow,
the huge castle isn't mine,
long tresses are Rupenzel's,
without the genie i do just fine!
Not the sea shore bonfire,
limo is too huge for two..
Dont want a life queen size..
only love n comfort will do!
All of it is impressive but
am not looking for materiality..
I dont wish for a fairy tale..
just a beautiful reality..

Comments

  1. Jane DoeMarch 2, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    First time here and I could absolutely connect with your verses... following right away!!!

    Simple and beautiful.. gives us more poetry :)))

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  2. BlogwatiGMarch 2, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    Short................sweet and super cute!

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  3. SeemaMarch 2, 2012 at 9:31 PM

    SOOO SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

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  4. RajaMarch 2, 2012 at 10:14 PM

    You have potential to become a good screenplay writer :)

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    1. UpasanaMarch 6, 2012 at 12:18 PM

      Awww..Thank you Raja! You are too sweet!

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    2. RajaMarch 7, 2012 at 11:50 PM

      ya nowadays eating lots of sweet ;)

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    3. UpasanaMarch 10, 2012 at 10:46 AM

      Thats a good thing if it results in you being sweet! Keep gorging!

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  5. Saru SinghalMarch 3, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    Such a lovely poem. What flow!!!

    Love Love Love it!

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    1. UpasanaMarch 6, 2012 at 12:19 PM

      Thank you Saru! Means a lot coming from you!

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    2. Saru SinghalMarch 7, 2012 at 12:42 AM

      You know I always like simple poetry. I love Shakespeare but in his time even day to day language was that complex. Then we had Robert Frost, he was way too simpler (as compared to WS) as in his times, language was less complicating. And, now in our times, when language is simple, we need to convey thoughts in simple words.

      What you did here is remarkable. :)

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    3. UpasanaMarch 10, 2012 at 10:49 AM

      I try to be simple in my thoughts and the use of words! I, as a personal choice, don't like reading complicated stuff and big words! Its easier to relate if the words used are simple.And that is what i try to make my writing.Thanks a ton for your comment Saru!

      The best thing is that you were a major inspiration for me.I read the wonderful work you have done and decided to pursue poetry writing seriously!So,a compliment from you means a lot!

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  6. MalinyMarch 3, 2012 at 11:01 AM

    beautiful the way you expressed it and also the theme :)

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  7. CYNOSUREMarch 3, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    lovely poem... :)

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  8. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comMarch 3, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    d poetry's very sweet..
    even though you don't wish for fairy tales..
    ur lines make u sound like ur straight out from one of em.. :)

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  9. Jen..The Butterfly EffectMarch 3, 2012 at 9:56 PM

    Dont want a life queen size..
    only love n comfort will do!
    All of it is impressive but
    am not looking for materiality..
    I dont wish for a fairy tale..
    just a beautiful reality.. AWWW so beautiful!!! Love your rhythm of your poem!! :) Comes truly from your heart!! :)

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  10. ArnieMarch 4, 2012 at 1:09 AM

    Lovely little poem, keep writing

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  11. SangrywordsMarch 4, 2012 at 11:46 AM

    very nice ... Upasana !!

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  12. KajalMarch 4, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    so beautiful...so crisp...so straight from the heart and simple.LOVED it:)

    Glad to have found you at Indiblogger. Your newest follower and regular visitor now
    Cheers
    Kajal

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    1. UpasanaMarch 6, 2012 at 12:33 PM

      Thank you for your comment Kajal! And welcome here!

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  13. Madhav MishraMarch 4, 2012 at 3:11 PM

    yaar tu to khatarnaak poet ho gayi hai ekdum

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  14. AnonymousMarch 4, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    Beautiful lines..!!

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  15. PrabhavathiMarch 4, 2012 at 10:03 PM

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    1. UpasanaMarch 6, 2012 at 12:39 PM

      I did ! Thank you Prabhavahi! You made me smile!

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  16. shirin goelMarch 6, 2012 at 12:19 PM

    The contents are really good…
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  17. Princess PooMarch 6, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    This is beautiful :).
    Words from heart :). Lovely poem :).
    Just loved it :).

    New follower here :D

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    1. UpasanaMarch 10, 2012 at 10:50 AM

      Thank you Princess Poo! I am glad you liked it.I hope you find this space interesting!

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  18. umashankarMarch 6, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    Very noble thoughts these, and very well expressed. I like the choice of words.

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  19. Red HandedMarch 8, 2012 at 8:26 AM

    SIGH!!! If only beautiful reality was a bit more constant..and not so fluctuating.
    Loved the lines!

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  20. raMarch 9, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    i say 1 word 3 times "wow wow wow"

    or

    i say 3 words 1 time "good better best"

    my super liking for this poem remains the same :-)

    btw, you've been tagged:
    rahul-aggarwal.blogspot.in/2012/03/tagged-tag-thon.html

    regards
    rahul

    PS : do not publish the previous comment...oops its published...delete it...typo mistake in it :-)

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    1. UpasanaMarch 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM

      Thank you Rahul! Sweet words! Thank you for the tag!

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  21. UpasanaMarch 10, 2012 at 10:52 AM

    Thank you for the award Poo!

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  22. AnonymousMarch 20, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    Lovely Words.

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