Friday, March 2, 2012

I don't wish for a fairy tale....




Neither the red roses,
nor the candle light..
No popping of the bubbly
on a moonlit night..
I don't live on the rainbow,
the huge castle isn't mine,
long tresses are Rupenzel's,
without the genie i do just fine!
Not the sea shore bonfire,
limo is too huge for two..
Dont want a life queen size..
only love n comfort will do!
All of it is impressive but
am not looking for materiality..
I dont wish for a fairy tale..
just a beautiful reality..

48 comments:

  1. First time here and I could absolutely connect with your verses... following right away!!!

    Simple and beautiful.. gives us more poetry :)))

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  2. Short................sweet and super cute!

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    1. Thank you BlogwatiG! I love your blogname!

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  3. SOOO SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

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  4. You have potential to become a good screenplay writer :)

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    1. Awww..Thank you Raja! You are too sweet!

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    2. ya nowadays eating lots of sweet ;)

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    3. Thats a good thing if it results in you being sweet! Keep gorging!

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  5. Such a lovely poem. What flow!!!

    Love Love Love it!

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    1. Thank you Saru! Means a lot coming from you!

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    2. You know I always like simple poetry. I love Shakespeare but in his time even day to day language was that complex. Then we had Robert Frost, he was way too simpler (as compared to WS) as in his times, language was less complicating. And, now in our times, when language is simple, we need to convey thoughts in simple words.

      What you did here is remarkable. :)

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    3. I try to be simple in my thoughts and the use of words! I, as a personal choice, don't like reading complicated stuff and big words! Its easier to relate if the words used are simple.And that is what i try to make my writing.Thanks a ton for your comment Saru!

      The best thing is that you were a major inspiration for me.I read the wonderful work you have done and decided to pursue poetry writing seriously!So,a compliment from you means a lot!

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  6. beautiful the way you expressed it and also the theme :)

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  7. d poetry's very sweet..
    even though you don't wish for fairy tales..
    ur lines make u sound like ur straight out from one of em.. :)

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  8. Dont want a life queen size..
    only love n comfort will do!
    All of it is impressive but
    am not looking for materiality..
    I dont wish for a fairy tale..
    just a beautiful reality.. AWWW so beautiful!!! Love your rhythm of your poem!! :) Comes truly from your heart!! :)

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  9. Lovely little poem, keep writing

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  10. so beautiful...so crisp...so straight from the heart and simple.LOVED it:)

    Glad to have found you at Indiblogger. Your newest follower and regular visitor now
    Cheers
    Kajal

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    1. Thank you for your comment Kajal! And welcome here!

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  11. yaar tu to khatarnaak poet ho gayi hai ekdum

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    1. I did ! Thank you Prabhavahi! You made me smile!

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  14. This is beautiful :).
    Words from heart :). Lovely poem :).
    Just loved it :).

    New follower here :D

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    1. Thank you Princess Poo! I am glad you liked it.I hope you find this space interesting!

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  15. Very noble thoughts these, and very well expressed. I like the choice of words.

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  16. SIGH!!! If only beautiful reality was a bit more constant..and not so fluctuating.
    Loved the lines!

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  17. An Award for one of my favorite Blogger http://sweetsomethingz.blogspot.in/2012/03/versatile-blogger.html :D :).

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  18. i say 1 word 3 times "wow wow wow"

    or

    i say 3 words 1 time "good better best"

    my super liking for this poem remains the same :-)

    btw, you've been tagged:
    rahul-aggarwal.blogspot.in/2012/03/tagged-tag-thon.html

    regards
    rahul

    PS : do not publish the previous comment...oops its published...delete it...typo mistake in it :-)

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    1. Thank you Rahul! Sweet words! Thank you for the tag!

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