Holding hands...

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I look around, i see no one..
Feeling scared and undone..

Just when the tears 
were about to flow,
You come ahead and
 things change in a go...
The dark clouds part,
and the sun suddenly 
comes out to shine..
As your fingers get in the
spaces between mine...




Comments

  1. AyushiFebruary 20, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    Pretty romance <3

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    1. UpasanaFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:56 PM

      Thank you Serenditpity! Have i told you that your blog name is one of my fav words!

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  2. Prateek BagriFebruary 20, 2012 at 3:22 PM

    I am really bad with poems anything that makes a beautiful abstract is a win for me.

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  3. Tarang SinhaFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:17 PM

    Nice & sweet:)

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  4. Mohit UdhwaniFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:49 AM

    Awesome Awesome Awesome is the only word comes to my mind after reading this........

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  5. Manreet Sodhi SomeshwarFebruary 22, 2012 at 7:24 AM

    Enjoyed reading your poem - it's universal and can be for the love between partners, between parent and child, between friends. Super!

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  6. UnknownFebruary 22, 2012 at 6:57 PM

    Sigh. I miss that feeling.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2012 at 1:51 PM

    Wow....loved the way of presentation...

    picturebite.com

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  8. UpasanaFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    Thank you Jidhu!

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  9. UpasanaFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:56 PM

    :-)

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  10. Sahana RaoFebruary 26, 2012 at 1:00 AM

    I loved these lines..
    As your fingers get in the
    spaces between mine.
    Ewww.. Romantic!

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