Monday, February 20, 2012

Holding hands...




I look around, i see no one..
Feeling scared and undone..

Just when the tears 
were about to flow,
You come ahead and
 things change in a go...
The dark clouds part,
and the sun suddenly 
comes out to shine..
As your fingers get in the
spaces between mine...




21 comments:

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    1. Thank you Serenditpity! Have i told you that your blog name is one of my fav words!

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  2. I am really bad with poems anything that makes a beautiful abstract is a win for me.

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  3. Awesome Awesome Awesome is the only word comes to my mind after reading this........

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  4. Enjoyed reading your poem - it's universal and can be for the love between partners, between parent and child, between friends. Super!

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  6. I loved these lines..
    As your fingers get in the
    spaces between mine.
    Ewww.. Romantic!

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