Darkness...

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Killing me is the darkness around,
Doing it quietly without a sound..

Darkness, which is a part of my life,
is standing besides, with a knife..

Searching for a way to escape,
as the darkness has reached my nape...

Cannot find a place to hide,
The scope of darkness being too wide..

The gloom has taken over,as
from darkness, there is no cover..

Now i know life is just a "fee",
as the darkness is within me!

Comments

  1. Saru SinghalAugust 24, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    The last two lines, MIDAS TOUCH. Lovely, you are a great poet...Saying thoughts in simple words is very difficult and you excel in it...

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  2. UpasanaAugust 24, 2011 at 11:10 PM

    @Saru SinghalHey!! Thank you for such a sweet comment!! u made my day!!

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  3. Jheyah_mistFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    http://jheyah28.blogspot.com/2012/01/worldliness-hazy-skies.html
    just want to share it!:)

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  4. Jheyah_mistFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    borrow your pic! :) find it so suitable for my poem too.. :) 
     nice poem any way. :) 

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  5. xyzMarch 1, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    I can so much relate your expressions at this time of the hour.

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