Where all words fail...

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Flutter of thousand butterflies
or a little twinkle in the eyes,
Silent prayer on the lips
or a look that makes heart skip.

Feeling that makes us live
Most used word, least descriptive!
So many phrases used in vain
Phrases expressing joy, sorrow and pain!


Can be expressed, not defined
Meaning known to heart, not mind,
Words and actions plenty, useful few
All used to say just "I love you"!



Comments

  1. Sahana RaoSeptember 20, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Wow! "Most used word, least descriptive!" So true!
    No words can ever express the depth and actual feeling of being in love!
    Simple words, deep meaning. :)

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  2. UpasanaSeptember 20, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    Thank you Spicy Sweet !! :-)

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  3. mehalSeptember 20, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    Flutter of thousand butterflies
    or a little twinkle in the eyes,
    Silent prayer on the lips
    or a look that makes heart skip....

    ahhhhh,,so nice lines...
    jsut in 2 words,,"loving lovely"

    and that chotu(v) is soo cute :*)

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  4. kalpak n.September 20, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    awwwwwww...love u too man...u dint have to go and write a whole post about it :)

    awesome awesome awesome. i can read it again and again. loved it.

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  5. ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ AshwiniSeptember 20, 2011 at 2:44 PM

    Very well written! I loved the lines.

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  6. nikithaSeptember 20, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    chooooo cuteee..... loved it loved it... :)

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  7. POOJA...September 20, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    feelings that makes us live... wow... really we all r living caz of feelings, love n relations... very nice...

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  8. Subhrashis AdhikariSeptember 20, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    Wow Upasana....loved it...true...it's a feelings more than a word...cannot be defined :)

    Cheers!
    SUB

    http://khonjtheeternalsearch.blogspot.com/

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  9. Saru SinghalSeptember 20, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    Oh, I'm in love with this poem. Everything is so perfect, the words, rhyme, thought. Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant!!!

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  10. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:44 PM

    Thank you mehal!!

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  11. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    Yay!! you finally know!! **Blush blush**kalpak n.

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  12. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    Thank you @ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwini!

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  13. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Thank you nikitha !!

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  14. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Thank you POOJA...!! Welcome to my blog!

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  15. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Thanks a lot SUB !!

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  16. UpasanaSeptember 21, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    Wow!! Thank you Saru Singhal !! That coming from you is really special!! You made me day!! :-)

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  17. AnuragSeptember 22, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    very well written...whomever it is dedicated to , will just lay back with a broad smile on his face and silently bask in the light of ur beautiful expression :)

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  18. UpasanaSeptember 22, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    Thank you Anurag !!

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  19. Sameera KesirajuJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Simple and sweet. Nice poem.

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  20. Sanjay Kumar940January 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Very Impressive like ur all poetry!
    i m follow ur blog .....

    sanjay bhaskar
    sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com

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  21. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Thank you Sunita!! 

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  22. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Sanjay! you are very generous with your compliments! Welcome to my blog!

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  23. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Sameera!

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  24. 7sunita3February 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    aww what lovely sweet lines :)

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  25. SubeshnaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    I found your poem from Indibloggers Reddit community. I am glad to have found your blog. It's beautiful.

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  26. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Ah!! Welcome to my blog Subeshna! And thank you for a really sweet comment!!

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