Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Where all words fail...



Flutter of thousand butterflies
or a little twinkle in the eyes,
Silent prayer on the lips
or a look that makes heart skip.

Feeling that makes us live
Most used word, least descriptive!
So many phrases used in vain
Phrases expressing joy, sorrow and pain!


Can be expressed, not defined
Meaning known to heart, not mind,
Words and actions plenty, useful few
All used to say just "I love you"!



26 comments:

  1. Wow! "Most used word, least descriptive!" So true!
    No words can ever express the depth and actual feeling of being in love!
    Simple words, deep meaning. :)

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  2. Flutter of thousand butterflies
    or a little twinkle in the eyes,
    Silent prayer on the lips
    or a look that makes heart skip....

    ahhhhh,,so nice lines...
    jsut in 2 words,,"loving lovely"

    and that chotu(v) is soo cute :*)

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  3. awwwwwww...love u too man...u dint have to go and write a whole post about it :)

    awesome awesome awesome. i can read it again and again. loved it.

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  4. chooooo cuteee..... loved it loved it... :)

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  5. feelings that makes us live... wow... really we all r living caz of feelings, love n relations... very nice...

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  6. Wow Upasana....loved it...true...it's a feelings more than a word...cannot be defined :)

    Cheers!
    SUB

    http://khonjtheeternalsearch.blogspot.com/

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  7. Oh, I'm in love with this poem. Everything is so perfect, the words, rhyme, thought. Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant!!!

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  8. Yay!! you finally know!! **Blush blush**kalpak n.

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  9. Wow!! Thank you Saru Singhal !! That coming from you is really special!! You made me day!! :-)

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  10. very well written...whomever it is dedicated to , will just lay back with a broad smile on his face and silently bask in the light of ur beautiful expression :)

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  11. Simple and sweet. Nice poem.

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  12. Very Impressive like ur all poetry!
    i m follow ur blog .....

    sanjay bhaskar
    sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com

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  13. Thank you Sanjay! you are very generous with your compliments! Welcome to my blog!

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  14. aww what lovely sweet lines :)

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  15. I found your poem from Indibloggers Reddit community. I am glad to have found your blog. It's beautiful.

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  16. Ah!! Welcome to my blog Subeshna! And thank you for a really sweet comment!!

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