Saturday, October 1, 2011

All it took was an embrace...



My mind is playing games with me
I asked it to stay still for a while
But, today it is as playful as a kid,
one thought after another,
from the huge pile!

I noticed him standing close,
mind stopped playing as 
heart increased its pace,
The world ceased to exist,
And all it took was an embrace!


37 comments:

  1. The world ceased to exist,
    And all it took was an embrace!

    Haaye mai vaari jaavaan ;)

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  2. Thank you Mohit!! :-) I love the smiley!! :-) :-)

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  3. sometimes all we need is a hug <3

    cheers
    Chintu Singh

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  4. Beautiful poem...Started little playfully and end couldn't be better...
    Saru

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  5. jaadu pi jhappi!!! Sometimes the mind should play like that innocent kid :)

    Cheers!
    SUB
    http://khonjtheeternalsearch.blogspot.com/

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  6. When  we try to be an observer of our mind, 
    we may realize so many new experiences.
    Thanks for this nice poetry.

    If you like hindi blogs,please,visit mine also.

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  7. Agreed! But only if its sometimes!!

    Thank you for your comment.Cheers!!

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  8. Thank you Umesh! And welcome to my blog!

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  9. Sweeetttt poetry!!!

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  10. chintukla sa cute poem!!!!!

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  11. A touch can do wonders indeed :))

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  12. Short and very very very sweet :)

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  13. Just like your comment! Thank you Anurag!

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  14. A sweet little one with very nice end!

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  15. Wow Kunal!! I am a fan!! beautiful!! 

    Thank you for gracing my blog with your comment! 

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  16. short and nice poem. love the way you concluded. 

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  18. beautiful.  "all it took was an embrace." , that line can make one happy those who have had that embrace and would reveal a tinge of pain for those who hadn't. :|

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  19. Wow, Amazing-Amazing-Amazing 
    :)

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  20. It's amazing how all the love in the world fails before one person whose embrace redefine the meaning of love for us :) Nice poem..

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  21. I appreciate for your poem...nice... amazing writing .......!


    sanjay bhaskar
    http://sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com/

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  22. Simple and nice! :)

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  23. Totally! Thank you for your comment Chintu Singh!

    P.s : am in love with your new name!! find it too cute!! :-)

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  24. Thank you Saru! means a lot coming from you!

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  25. Totally!! Thank you for your comment! I would love to read hindi blogs too.But you haven't left your blog link.

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  26. Let the mind do its thing
    Let the heart increase its pace.
    If in its one embrace..
    The world ceases to exist,
    Then, he deserves a place,
    In your beautiful space..
    I say, shower him your grace!  :D

    http://fromdevilsworkshop.blogspot.com/

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  27. Thank you Sankara Jayanth. Lets hope everyone who has not felt that embrace, feels it soon.The world would be a happier place then. :-)

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