All it took was an embrace...

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My mind is playing games with me
I asked it to stay still for a while
But, today it is as playful as a kid,
one thought after another,
from the huge pile!

I noticed him standing close,
mind stopped playing as 
heart increased its pace,
The world ceased to exist,
And all it took was an embrace!


Comments

  1. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you ji!! :-)

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  2. GvSparxJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    The world ceased to exist,
    And all it took was an embrace!

    Haaye mai vaari jaavaan ;)

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  3. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you Mohit!! :-) I love the smiley!! :-) :-)

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  4. Derebail2008January 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    good poetry

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  5. PK TalliJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    sometimes all we need is a hug <3

    cheers
    Chintu Singh

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  6. Saru SinghalJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Beautiful poem...Started little playfully and end couldn't be better...
    Saru

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  7. KHOJJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    jaadu pi jhappi!!! Sometimes the mind should play like that innocent kid :)

    Cheers!
    SUB
    http://khonjtheeternalsearch.blogspot.com/

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  8. ShriganeshayanamahJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    When  we try to be an observer of our mind, 
    we may realize so many new experiences.
    Thanks for this nice poetry.

    If you like hindi blogs,please,visit mine also.

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  9. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Agreed! But only if its sometimes!!

    Thank you for your comment.Cheers!!

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  10. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you Umesh! And welcome to my blog!

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  11. Mehal DharamshiJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Sweeetttt poetry!!!

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  12. Nikitha2590January 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    chintukla sa cute poem!!!!!

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  13. sarah_sweetyJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    A touch can do wonders indeed :))

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  14. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Totally Sarah! Welcome to my blog!

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  15. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Thank you Priyanka!

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  16. Anurag6052January 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Short and very very very sweet :)

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  17. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Just like your comment! Thank you Anurag!

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  18. Rahulbhatia20January 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    A sweet little one with very nice end!

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  19. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Thank you Rahul!

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  20. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:30 PM

    Wow Kunal!! I am a fan!! beautiful!! 

    Thank you for gracing my blog with your comment! 

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  21. LeoPawJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:31 PM

    short and nice poem. love the way you concluded. 

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  22. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:31 PM

    Thank you LeoPaw!

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  23. Sankara JayanthJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:32 PM

    beautiful.  "all it took was an embrace." , that line can make one happy those who have had that embrace and would reveal a tinge of pain for those who hadn't. :|

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  24. Mohit UdhwaniFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:11 AM

    Wow, Amazing-Amazing-Amazing 
    :)

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  25. priyankavictorFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    It's amazing how all the love in the world fails before one person whose embrace redefine the meaning of love for us :) Nice poem..

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  26. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Sanjay!

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  27. Sanjay Kumar940February 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    I appreciate for your poem...nice... amazing writing .......!


    sanjay bhaskar
    http://sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com/

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  28. Sameera KesirajuFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Simple and nice! :)

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  29. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Totally! Thank you for your comment Chintu Singh!

    P.s : am in love with your new name!! find it too cute!! :-)

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  30. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Saru! means a lot coming from you!

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  31. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Sameera!

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  32. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Totally!! Thank you for your comment! I would love to read hindi blogs too.But you haven't left your blog link.

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  33. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Nikitha!

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  34. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Mehal!

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  35. KunalFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Let the mind do its thing
    Let the heart increase its pace.
    If in its one embrace..
    The world ceases to exist,
    Then, he deserves a place,
    In your beautiful space..
    I say, shower him your grace!  :D

    http://fromdevilsworkshop.blogspot.com/

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  36. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:14 AM

    Thank you Sankara Jayanth. Lets hope everyone who has not felt that embrace, feels it soon.The world would be a happier place then. :-)

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