Regret..
Distant dreams rarely come true,
One of mine being you.
Had it not turned out this way,
We would have been together this day.
Now, unhappiness surrounds me,
Making me believe i am free,
Freedom like this i didn't ask,
Sorrow and distress wearing its mask.
Faraway are you from me now,
It happened i don't know how,
Wish you were mine for keeps,
We, together, gave me happiness in heaps!
True! but not always.Thank you for your comment Sahana!
ReplyDeleteThank you Leo!
ReplyDeleteThank you A N Chitra!
ReplyDeleteSimple yet poignant! I loved your poem.
ReplyDeletedistance pricks!!!
ReplyDeletebut nicely written.,
Distance makes the heart grow fonder. Don't worry. Loved the lines penned.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, deep thoughts... beautifully penned down..
ReplyDeleteThank you Chintu Singh for the encouragement! It means a lot!
ReplyDeleteArre wah!! Very well written Kalpak!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sub!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosun!
ReplyDelete:( Loved the poem....sad but true, sad but very well written...
ReplyDeleteUpasana, I really like your poetry, look forward to some more
~Chintan
But i know you'll come back soon
ReplyDeleteIn this lonely night i will see moon
and then i'll hold u tight in my arms
A wish so craved. A hug so warm.
Romantic, but distance always hurts in heaps! Could feel it in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteLeo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
sad memories of partings....but very well written... :)
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