What is wrong with you my friend?

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What is wrong my dear friend?
Why have your talks come to an end?
Your beautiful smile is nowhere to see,
the smile which was your sign to be!

Amazed i am by the changes in you,
Changes you don't even acknowledge as few;
But, deep down i know, you know,
Changes have occurred in you at one go!

Happens everything for a reason say i,
Happy times will be back after these die;
Bounce back as i expect you to,
Please return cause i need you!

This poem is by me, as you can see,
Laugh if you want but its as original as me!
If this could bring a smile on your face,
I would consider it as sweet praise!




P.S : This poem was the very first poem i wrote.It was written for a very close friend who was going thru a rough phase as an attempt to cheer her up!

Comments

  1. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Thank you Jegan!

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  2. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Thank you Saru!

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  3. Camp_udhwaniJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Wow !!!!!!!
    As a first poem, its really awesome

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  4. Jegan VengadaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    You write well!! Keep it going!!

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  5. m to mFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    I wanted to thank you for this excellent read!! I definitely loved every little bit of it.

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  6. go pro heroFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    Very nice line. I love your job..

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  7. KHOJFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    lovely lines.....i'm sure it did cheered her up :)

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  8. Marita AbrahamFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    This is what I love about poetry. You get to crystallise these long-forgotten feelings into a few lines, a few verses. When you revisit them, it is as if they have not withered over time. 

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  9. GuestFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Your first poem was soooo GOOD? WOW! Your friend must have been very happy! :)

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  10. RahulBhatiaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Very nice poetry ! Beautiful thoughts..

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  11. AnushaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    I think I have a friend who I cud use this for? :d

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  12. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you!! :-)

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  13. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Wah wah wah Kunal! Your comment always steals the show! :-)

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  14. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    I began blogging in may '11.This is my 23rd post! you are most welcome to read and follow the rest!

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  15. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Yes she was Sahana! Thank you!

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  16. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you Sameera!

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  17. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    That happens a lot and it sucks! Thank you for your comment!

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  18. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you Chintu Singh!

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  19. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you Neeraj!

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  20. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Yep, it did. Thank you Kumar

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  21. Kunal MalviyaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Hope, your friend smile after reading this.
    Her gloom was lifted and she was in bliss.
    Reading lines like this, encouraged she was.
    Heaps of praises for you, without any pause. :D

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  22. retouche photosFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Nice and very good your first poem...When you get your blog started don’t forget to post a link to it here, I’d love to subscribe to it!

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  23. Sameera KesirajuFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    How sweet is it to write a poem for a friend. :) Thoughtful!

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  24. PrateekFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Sigh!
    Reminded me of a year gap after school got over. Met my best friend and there he was, all changed.
    Nostalgia. :)

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  25. PK TalliFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    <3 aww you are so good with poems and am sure your friend is proud of you too...

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  26. Saru SinghalFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Awww, she should definitely cheer up and smile...:)

    Lovely poem:)

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  27. Neeraj KumarFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    very lovely way to cheer up your lovely friend! enjoyed reading it to a tee.

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  28. Kumar BibekFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Nice one :) Did it have any effect on your friend's gloom?

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  29. AnonymousAugust 9, 2012 at 11:06 AM

    Thanks for the poem it gives me some hope for my friend. It makes me feel better

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