Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Whisper...







A glance, a stare, that look...
Life seems magical as in a book...

Warm breath felt on the ear,
A whisper comes along,
Words chosen not so wisely,
Heard as if a beautiful song...

33 comments:

  1. Thank you Braj ! And welcome to my blog!

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  2. Aw! Very beautiful. A lot is wonderfully expressed in these few words!

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  3. Coming again as the magic of your words is still lingering on me...

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  4. Thats what it was meant to do!! Thank you Chintu Singh!

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  5. cools ... optimized words to crisply present the meaning ...nice one !

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  6. Sahana, The message was conveyed..and someone has beautifully replied as well.Check out the very first comment! 

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  7. Sometimes when we get cornered by "situation", whisper is what makes it a "moment".

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  8. How I wish these lines never ended. Why such a short poem?

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  9. Its totally cheesy but who said cheesy isn't sweet!! 

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  10. Aww...Thats so sweet Saru! you are welcome always!

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  11. The look that he took..
    It held my gaze for long

    The things he whispered
    Were beautiful than a song
    The question he asked was
    Can we be together..
    LIFELONG

    A bit cheesy..I know! :D

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  12. Lovely!

    It's so romantic. Few words which speaks volumes. It truly epitomizes the beauty of a romantic encounter in the form of whisper. Loved it. I lived your words...A magical piece!!!

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  13. Leaves me with a warm feeling.. aww. nice! :)

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  14. warm breath on ear, reminds me of something really mushy :)

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  15. poems samajh nahin aate because i cant write them :( appreciate the effort though

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  16. Short and sweet one :0 Keep going :)
    http://deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.com

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  17. A whisper sweet discloses
    the magic that you feel,
    I'm delighted with the songs,
    songs tell me magic is real.

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  18. बेहद खूबसूरत कविता




    संजय
    भास्कर


    आदत....मुस्कुराने की


    पर आपका स्वागत है


    http://sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com

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  19. Short yet a sweet poem! :) So heart renderingly beautiful :)

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