Whisper...

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A glance, a stare, that look...
Life seems magical as in a book...

Warm breath felt on the ear,
A whisper comes along,
Words chosen not so wisely,
Heard as if a beautiful song...

Comments

  1. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Braj ! And welcome to my blog!

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  2. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Harsha.

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  3. Brajmohan KumarJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Love this post :)

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  4. Harsha BJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Aw! Very beautiful. A lot is wonderfully expressed in these few words!

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  5. magiceyeJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    beautiful!

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  6. :-DeeJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Simple and sweet!!! :)

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  7. Saru SinghalJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Coming again as the magic of your words is still lingering on me...

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  8. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thanks a lot Saru. :-)

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  9. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Sameera!

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  10. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Ashish!

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  11. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thats what it was meant to do!! Thank you Chintu Singh!

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  12. Ashish JoshiJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    cools ... optimized words to crisply present the meaning ...nice one !

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  13. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    How true! Thank you Prateek!

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  14. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you for your comment Maddy!

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  15. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Sahana, The message was conveyed..and someone has beautifully replied as well.Check out the very first comment! 

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  16. PrateekJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Sometimes when we get cornered by "situation", whisper is what makes it a "moment".

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  17. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you Sanjay!

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  18. GuestFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    How I wish these lines never ended. Why such a short poem?

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  19. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Magiceye!

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  20. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Its totally cheesy but who said cheesy isn't sweet!! 

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  21. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Dee!

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  22. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Aww...Thats so sweet Saru! you are welcome always!

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  23. Kunal MalviyaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    The look that he took..
    It held my gaze for long

    The things he whispered
    Were beautiful than a song
    The question he asked was
    Can we be together..
    LIFELONG

    A bit cheesy..I know! :D

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  24. Saru SinghalFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Lovely!

    It's so romantic. Few words which speaks volumes. It truly epitomizes the beauty of a romantic encounter in the form of whisper. Loved it. I lived your words...A magical piece!!!

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  25. Sameera KesirajuFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Leaves me with a warm feeling.. aww. nice! :)

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  26. chintanFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    warm breath on ear, reminds me of something really mushy :)

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  27. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Depak!

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  28. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    The best comment ever!! Thank you!

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  29. maddy ..February 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    poems samajh nahin aate because i cant write them :( appreciate the effort though

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  30. Depak KarthikFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Short and sweet one :0 Keep going :)
    http://deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.com

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  31. AnuragFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    A whisper sweet discloses
    the magic that you feel,
    I'm delighted with the songs,
    songs tell me magic is real.

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  32. Sanjay Kumar940February 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    बेहद खूबसूरत कविता




    संजय
    भास्कर


    आदत....मुस्कुराने की


    पर आपका स्वागत है


    http://sanjaybhaskar.blogspot.com

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  33. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 15, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    Short yet a sweet poem! :) So heart renderingly beautiful :)

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