Why are you giving your princess away?

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Admiring you, i have grown,
Walking on the path you have shown,
However deep i may fall,
You were strong and unfazed by it all,
Dust my knees,show me the way ahead,
Head help up high, the life you have led,
Always pushing me to try some more,
Never giving up the smile you wore,
I am your princess you always say,
Then why are you giving your princess away?

Comments

  1. RahulBhatiaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Upasana, this was a remarkable poem and having just given away my sweet princess recently, I can relate to this sweet poem very well!!Absolutely gorgeous and coming straight from the heart!!

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  2. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Anurag!

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  3. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:28 PM

    Thank you Sarah! and welcome to my blog!

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  4. Upasana SharmaJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Thank you Jyoti! You have a lovely blog and that was an awesome poem!

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  5. Jyoti mishraJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    Awesome writing Upasana ... loved the imagery u created with those words :)

    Fantastic read !!
    PS: thanks 4 dropping by !!

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  6. Darling DennisJanuary 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    I guess thats just the reality of life,someday u gotta leave...LOvely poem dear...1st time here and now following :)

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  7. Sanjay Kumar940January 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM

    First time enter ur blog
    amazing writing........upasana  ji

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  8. GuestFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Hope the world could answer this question on the system.' Loved these lines Upasana. Reminded me of my father.. Wyaan.. Wanna go back to Bangalore..
    Dust my knees,show me the way ahead,Head help up high, the life you have led..

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  9. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you manasa!

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  10. manasaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Every girl can relate to it! very touching!!

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  11. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Yes i have.And what you said was absolutely true, a father can never truly give away his princess.

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  12. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you Sahana!

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  13. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Thank you Saru!

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  14. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    Its lovely to have fathers comment on it.Thank you for your lovely comment Rahul.I wish your sweet princess a very happy married life! :-)

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  15. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Kalyan!

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  16. KalyanFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  17. KHOJFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    wow...i guess u got the reaction :D

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  18. Saru SinghalFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Happening since ages but God things have changed now. 


    A beautiful piece yet again...Good going Upasana...:)

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  19. prakash jainFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Wow...Superb flow of the poetry and excellent usage of Rhyming Pattern. Thoughts definitely are the soul of the poetry. Keep going...
    www.poeticprakash.com 

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  20. sarah_sweetyFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    thats so very beautiful and a genuine concern too :) few verses but they have d power to touch heart!

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  21. AnuragFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    A wonderful poem...every word was so apt and meaningful...two big thumbs up !!!

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  22. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    You won't believe it Sub, but while writing this poem i thought of you and little Hridhima.I wanted to know your reaction on it being an evolving daddy! :-)

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  23. KHOJFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    wow...lovely...
    it took me on a time travel...my princess will grow and leave some day....will she ask me the same question?...would be a very difficult one to answer...guess fathers never give their princess away...they will always be there with them, in their heart....:)

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  24. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    You are most welcome Dennis.Thank you for your lovely comment.

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  25. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Chintu Singh! I have read Kunal's poems, he is brilliant!

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  26. PK TalliFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Awwww!! Love you for this one Upasana....

    :) Have you read Kunal's poems? He too surprised with his poems and now you <3

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  27. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Thank you Prakash!

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  28. Upasana SharmaFebruary 1, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Welcome to my blog Sanjay! :-)

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  29. Princess PooMarch 6, 2012 at 2:31 PM

    Wow :). Such true words :).
    Couldn't have been expressed more beautifully :).
    Awesome one Upasana jhi :)

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