Thursday, November 10, 2011

Why are you giving your princess away?



Admiring you, i have grown,
Walking on the path you have shown,
However deep i may fall,
You were strong and unfazed by it all,
Dust my knees,show me the way ahead,
Head help up high, the life you have led,
Always pushing me to try some more,
Never giving up the smile you wore,
I am your princess you always say,
Then why are you giving your princess away?

29 comments:

  1. Upasana, this was a remarkable poem and having just given away my sweet princess recently, I can relate to this sweet poem very well!!Absolutely gorgeous and coming straight from the heart!!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thank you Sarah! and welcome to my blog!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thank you Jyoti! You have a lovely blog and that was an awesome poem!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Awesome writing Upasana ... loved the imagery u created with those words :)

    Fantastic read !!
    PS: thanks 4 dropping by !!

    ReplyDelete
  5. I guess thats just the reality of life,someday u gotta leave...LOvely poem dear...1st time here and now following :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. First time enter ur blog
    amazing writing........upasana  ji

    ReplyDelete
  7. Hope the world could answer this question on the system.' Loved these lines Upasana. Reminded me of my father.. Wyaan.. Wanna go back to Bangalore..
    Dust my knees,show me the way ahead,Head help up high, the life you have led..

    ReplyDelete
  8. Every girl can relate to it! very touching!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Yes i have.And what you said was absolutely true, a father can never truly give away his princess.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Its lovely to have fathers comment on it.Thank you for your lovely comment Rahul.I wish your sweet princess a very happy married life! :-)

    ReplyDelete
  11. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

    ReplyDelete
  12. wow...i guess u got the reaction :D

    ReplyDelete
  13. Happening since ages but God things have changed now. 


    A beautiful piece yet again...Good going Upasana...:)

    ReplyDelete
  14. Wow...Superb flow of the poetry and excellent usage of Rhyming Pattern. Thoughts definitely are the soul of the poetry. Keep going...
    www.poeticprakash.com 

    ReplyDelete
  15. thats so very beautiful and a genuine concern too :) few verses but they have d power to touch heart!

    ReplyDelete
  16. A wonderful poem...every word was so apt and meaningful...two big thumbs up !!!

    ReplyDelete
  17. You won't believe it Sub, but while writing this poem i thought of you and little Hridhima.I wanted to know your reaction on it being an evolving daddy! :-)

    ReplyDelete
  18. wow...lovely...
    it took me on a time travel...my princess will grow and leave some day....will she ask me the same question?...would be a very difficult one to answer...guess fathers never give their princess away...they will always be there with them, in their heart....:)

    ReplyDelete
  19. You are most welcome Dennis.Thank you for your lovely comment.

    ReplyDelete
  20. Thank you Chintu Singh! I have read Kunal's poems, he is brilliant!

    ReplyDelete
  21. Awwww!! Love you for this one Upasana....

    :) Have you read Kunal's poems? He too surprised with his poems and now you <3

    ReplyDelete
  22. Wow :). Such true words :).
    Couldn't have been expressed more beautifully :).
    Awesome one Upasana jhi :)

    ReplyDelete

I love hearing from you! Please leave your comments below.