The perfect guy...
Perfection is too much to ask,
Measuring is too difficult a task,
Check list ready, seems a bit long,
Nobody fits it, then he comes along!
Brainy yet playful as a kid,
My heart says not a bad bid,
Can make me smile and can care,
My head still wonders, should i dare?
Sharing one coffee and then some more,
Head losing out, heart is in the fore,
Dates and incidents turn us from "i" to "we",
Imperfect though, but he is perfect for me!
That is really sweet, I can so relate to it! 'Dates and incidents turn us from "i" to "we"' - awesome line!
ReplyDeleteAwesome!! Truly love is beyond all that perfection and the ticking of the check list!! Infact love is perfect when it is imperfect :)!!!
ReplyDeleteAhha... Loving the person and accepting the person as is, is perfect love. You have caught on right ropes. Oh yes! Well rhymed poem..
ReplyDeleteAwww..thats so sweet of you Akila!! Thank you!! Really!! :-)
ReplyDeleteCouldn't have put it in a more beautiful and simpler way! Though we don't know each other at all., I am really happy for what you have 'earned' :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sourav!
ReplyDeleteLovely! Both, your love and the post :)
ReplyDeleteA reader, now.
Thank you Sumitra! :-)
ReplyDeleteYes it is!! That is what makes it special! Thank you Writing Bee!
ReplyDeleteHow true Farida! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mohit!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sahana!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Suruchi!!
ReplyDeleteHow true Peevee!! You just summarized the poem beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you Andy!
ReplyDeleteAwwww....Thank you Anurag!! :*
ReplyDeleteYou are absolutely right Venkateswaran! :-)
ReplyDeleteYou got it bang on Subhorup!
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru!
ReplyDeleteOh yes they do...Its probably one of their best kept secrets!
ReplyDeleteThat is so true! But whats also a fact is that the realization that the person you are in love with is not somebody you would have chosen in ideal scenario but if they go away your life will be less than ideal !
ReplyDeleteThank you Eatpraylovemovies! :-)
ReplyDeleteAwwww....Thank you Kunal!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Brajmohan !! :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesomest. Really this poem rocked. Loved it
ReplyDeletecame her via Kalpak-and this is the cutest shortest love message for all those who go around in circles finding love!:-)
ReplyDeleteSo true. We look for perfection, we have a list of things we want in our perfect partner.
ReplyDeleteBut when we actually do fall in love, the list is out of the window and we accept them entirely for who they are, however imperfect:)
Hello. We are imperfect humans existing in an imperfect world, but there is always perfection in love.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely expressed.
Thanks for sharing.
For ref:
My Wife, My Priceless Jewel
Poems are written, proses are said,
ReplyDeleteUr perfection in expression is still left unsaid
Easily among ur best works
Very nice one....
ReplyDeleteThe point you made is really correct. You might not find a perfect guy but you will find a person who can make you smile, and take all your problems away.... :)
Hope I am not wrong...
Nice one and so true. There is no perfect other than what is perfect for me. And in the evaluation, it is always the heart that one should trust.
ReplyDeleteWOW, last line is so profound and practical. Loved it Upasana:)
ReplyDeletehawww its like the signal taht there actually is some female who will find me good enogh :) its like the revelation that females go through the same turmoil that guys do
ReplyDeletemight sound crazy, but ur poem is my third signal from the universe in the recent days that i shud stop looking for my miss perfect, cos the one who'd be perfect for me might me very unlike the girl in my head.
ReplyDeleteGreat post upasana! Awesome.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
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No poem this time for me...It is too sweet to be meddled with. :D
ReplyDeletelove, romance between two souls depicted very well. *liked* it.
ReplyDeleteLove is looking at a imperfect person perfectly ;)
ReplyDeleteOH my... another lovely note! I can so relate to this one and know exactly how u feel :) Happy happy life, u two! :)
ReplyDeleteSmiles,
Nans
Thank you Nandita! :-)
DeleteI enjoyed. Nice one.
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