Wednesday, February 15, 2012

The person in the mirror....



Muffled screams amidst
deafening silence,
The world around spins
zooms in and out of the fog dense.
Struggling eyes looking,
searching for some hope.
The noose only tightens,
weapon being a silken rope.
Who do I call out to,
do you hear me friend?
Gasping for my last few breaths
as the rope nears my end.
I want to turn around,
to face the killer, I think
who could it be, remember,
behind stands the mirror!

23 comments:

  1. Well written!! A feeling of serene fills my mind amidst all the pandemonium!!

    :)

    Your new follower :)!!

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    1. :-)Thank you for your lovely comment!

      Welcome here Jen!

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  2. Wow...i love the ending. Nice poem!!

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  3. If I understand it correctly, then the rope which is tightening is held by none other than we ourselves here and we are getting choked by our own troubles and problems. Its us, ourselves, with whom we want freedom from. :)

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  4. yaar ye poem meri samajh hi nahin aate :( bade chote se hi problem hai, badi gaaliyan suni hai english classes mein

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    1. Koi baat nahi! Read Kunal's interpretation, he got it perfectly! :-)

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  5. wow... loved the read.. flow was quite balanced..

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    1. Thank you Fatso! I see you are new to blogging, I hope you enjoy it!

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  6. Quite a classic. Even I will be posting something on a classic note soon...You used the word 'amidst' in the first line and I used it in 3rd last I think.

    Beautiful, like the new look of your blog...:)

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  7. Lovely way of putting forth a fact.

    Nice message to spread...

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  8. I think you r heading toward wrong direction.. this is a bad post :)

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    1. At the risk of sounding defensive, I think you haven't got the meaning of the poem completely correctly! Nonetheless, i accept your opinion1

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