Kiss in the rain...

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Dreams come true, they say
My belief in these words i lay,
As i walk along with you
I see, what i think are,
on leaves few drops of dew!
Soon, drizzle picks up pace,
A huge smile appears on our face.
Eyes meet and then the lips,
Drenched, we kiss!
Some might call us crazy and insane,
They don't know it's our first rain!



Comments

  1. SeemaMarch 29, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    very beautiful and I must say very lovely lines

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  2. indu chhibberMarch 29, 2012 at 9:24 PM

    It was the rain God blessing you Upasana.

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  3. CYNOSUREMarch 29, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    nice compositions Upasana...u've very sweetly described the scene... :)

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  4. Ritesh AgarwalMarch 29, 2012 at 10:09 PM

    Brilliant....The emotional level is very high in the words

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  5. PranitaMarch 29, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    Awww... sweet! :)

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  6. Mohit UdhwaniMarch 29, 2012 at 10:38 PM

    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN


    &

    SWEETLY EXPRESSED.

    AWESOME FEELING IN HEART TOUCHING WORDS :)

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  7. Anil SawanMarch 30, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    thts pretty romantic :)

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  8. Shilpi DuttaMarch 30, 2012 at 2:04 AM

    awwww thats so cutee. Well penned!

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  9. umashankarMarch 30, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    Eleven lines in all, yet better than eleven pages of romance.

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  10. umashankarMarch 30, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    Eleven lines in all, yet better than eleven pages of romance.

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  11. Megha SarinMarch 30, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    Aww..romantic ;)

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  12. AnonymousMarch 30, 2012 at 12:59 PM

    Very Nice!!

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  13. RajaMarch 30, 2012 at 8:12 PM

    okaayyy.. liked it.

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  14. RahulMarch 30, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    :-) Not bad at all..

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  15. Deepa GopalMarch 31, 2012 at 11:42 AM

    Nice one...
    nice header pic as well :)

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  16. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comApril 1, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    romantic and young :)
    very fresh n exciting..
    nice one :)

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  17. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comApril 2, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    v smooth n v romantic :)
    lovely lines Upasana..

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  18. Saru SinghalApril 2, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    Romantic and beautifully written. Upasana, write I in caps, looks good... :)

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  19. KalyanApril 3, 2012 at 9:19 AM

    lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  20. KajalApril 9, 2012 at 8:16 AM

    Beautiful ... and to show you how much I love your blog.. here's something for you at http://purplechronicle.blogspot.com/2012/04/awesome-ness-has-arrived.html

    cheers,
    Kajal

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  21. Rahul BhatiaApril 9, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    Lovely poem and words, Upasana!

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