Thursday, March 29, 2012

Kiss in the rain...


Dreams come true, they say
My belief in these words i lay,
As i walk along with you
I see, what i think are,
on leaves few drops of dew!
Soon, drizzle picks up pace,
A huge smile appears on our face.
Eyes meet and then the lips,
Drenched, we kiss!
Some might call us crazy and insane,
They don't know it's our first rain!



41 comments:

  1. very beautiful and I must say very lovely lines

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  2. It was the rain God blessing you Upasana.

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  3. nice compositions Upasana...u've very sweetly described the scene... :)

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  4. Brilliant....The emotional level is very high in the words

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  5. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN


    &

    SWEETLY EXPRESSED.

    AWESOME FEELING IN HEART TOUCHING WORDS :)

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  6. awwww thats so cutee. Well penned!

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  7. Eleven lines in all, yet better than eleven pages of romance.

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  8. Eleven lines in all, yet better than eleven pages of romance.

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  9. Aww..romantic ;)

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  10. Nice one...
    nice header pic as well :)

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  11. romantic and young :)
    very fresh n exciting..
    nice one :)

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  12. v smooth n v romantic :)
    lovely lines Upasana..

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  13. Romantic and beautifully written. Upasana, write I in caps, looks good... :)

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  14. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  15. Beautiful ... and to show you how much I love your blog.. here's something for you at http://purplechronicle.blogspot.com/2012/04/awesome-ness-has-arrived.html

    cheers,
    Kajal

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    1. Thanks a ton Kajal! It made my day! :-)

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