You and me make a wonderful WE!

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We smile, we talk, we share,
We nurture, grow and we care..
We fight, we argue, we do it all,
We get back and it takes just a call.
We try again but sometimes we fall,
Holding each other,we again do it all...
Off balance, missing a turn,
Sometimes we think it lacks the fun.
Comes along one moment, out of the blue,
Making me fall again in love with u!
Who are we? I sometimes wonder..
Two souls tied by a thread so tender.
Is name the identity of this thread?
Or are we just two souls who cared! 



Comments

  1. CookieCrumbsInc.March 14, 2012 at 3:58 PM

    So imperfectly perfect :)

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  2. Dee........March 14, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    Beautiful :)
    Naam is the word for WE in tamil :)

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  3. Neeraj KumarMarch 14, 2012 at 4:10 PM

    lovely:)

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  4. Shamsud AhmedMarch 14, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    This is a fine write. I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. i dont write too many similar stuffs but if you like a little bit of darker side of poetry you can visit my blog (http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.com). Thank you again

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  5. umashankarMarch 14, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    Simple, yet striking!

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  6. Akshay Kumar GMarch 14, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    So beautifully crafted emotions.

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  7. AmitAagMarch 14, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    Absolutely wonderful Upasana!

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  8. CYNOSUREMarch 14, 2012 at 5:23 PM

    beautiful, lovely and cute... :)

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  9. Madhav MishraMarch 14, 2012 at 5:51 PM

    fir se poem? aur upar se love ishtory. kaash mein likh paata yaar

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    1. UpasanaMarch 15, 2012 at 8:46 AM

      Yeh poem phase chal raha hai mera! Tum try toh karo likhne ka!

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  10. NishaMarch 14, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    Good one Upasana!!! Liked it a lot...

    Thanks for visiting Random Thoughts

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  11. magiceyeMarch 14, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    Soul mates!!

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  12. Saru SinghalMarch 15, 2012 at 12:36 AM

    Beautiful and two souls who loved and cared...:)

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  13. Princess PooMarch 15, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    This is so beautiful :).

    I loved these two lines a lot:
    Comes along one moment, out of the blue,
    Making me fall again in love with u!

    Too good Upasana jhi :) Just loved it :D

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  14. Writing BeeMarch 15, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    Beautifully written. I could relate to each and every word. Had a beautiful time reading it :)

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  15. AnonymousMarch 15, 2012 at 11:21 PM

    A lovely romantic journey meaningfully written for the cause and not for the rules and rhymes of poetry.

    Keep going :)
    Best
    Katie

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  16. RajaMarch 15, 2012 at 11:54 PM

    Nice writing style.. keep your blog interesting :)

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  17. Vinay Leo R.March 16, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    For a moment, I had got confused, the photo is of lovers, but the words could easily reflect the love of a sibling too, the thread of the relation (or maybe the rakhi)..

    Admire the play of words. Beautiful! :)

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    1. UpasanaMarch 16, 2012 at 7:14 PM

      You gave such a beautiful different dimension to the poem Leo!Thank you!

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  18. Miss KomalMarch 16, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    The mingling of souls is pure and beautiful ..
    Nice write :)

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  19. RuhaniMarch 16, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    It's short, simple and sweet :)

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  20. UpasanaMarch 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM

    Thank you Ashwini!

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  21. AJMarch 16, 2012 at 11:56 PM

    Excellent ! Apt ! and Brilliant.

    AJ
    http://ajstates.blogspot.com

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  22. sridharMarch 17, 2012 at 3:23 AM

    awesome...

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  23. UnknownMarch 17, 2012 at 8:03 AM

    That was soooooooooooo Lovely!

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  24. Chetan MaheshwariMarch 18, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    i liked reading it.....thank you:)

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  25. UnknownOctober 12, 2013 at 9:33 AM

    can u provide me link of this song full??? i found this song as theme of samsung galaxy tab 3 :) thankyou.

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  26. UnknownAugust 10, 2014 at 12:22 AM

    It's so cute and heart-warming. :)

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  27. UnknownNovember 3, 2014 at 8:34 PM

    hmmmmm so sweet ........

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