Wednesday, March 14, 2012

You and me make a wonderful WE!




We smile, we talk, we share,
We nurture, grow and we care..
We fight, we argue, we do it all,
We get back and it takes just a call.
We try again but sometimes we fall,
Holding each other,we again do it all...
Off balance, missing a turn,
Sometimes we think it lacks the fun.
Comes along one moment, out of the blue,
Making me fall again in love with u!
Who are we? I sometimes wonder..
Two souls tied by a thread so tender.
Is name the identity of this thread?
Or are we just two souls who cared! 



51 comments:

  1. Beautiful :)
    Naam is the word for WE in tamil :)

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    1. Thank you Dee.I will remember that!

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  2. This is a fine write. I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. i dont write too many similar stuffs but if you like a little bit of darker side of poetry you can visit my blog (http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.com). Thank you again

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  3. Absolutely wonderful Upasana!

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  4. beautiful, lovely and cute... :)

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  5. fir se poem? aur upar se love ishtory. kaash mein likh paata yaar

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    1. Yeh poem phase chal raha hai mera! Tum try toh karo likhne ka!

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  6. Good one Upasana!!! Liked it a lot...

    Thanks for visiting Random Thoughts

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  7. Beautiful and two souls who loved and cared...:)

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  8. This is so beautiful :).

    I loved these two lines a lot:
    Comes along one moment, out of the blue,
    Making me fall again in love with u!

    Too good Upasana jhi :) Just loved it :D

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  9. That is so lovely Upasana. I read this poem almost for 3 times, I totally loved reading this. It was really good. The importance of "We" :-)

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  10. Beautifully written. I could relate to each and every word. Had a beautiful time reading it :)

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  11. A lovely romantic journey meaningfully written for the cause and not for the rules and rhymes of poetry.

    Keep going :)
    Best
    Katie

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  12. Nice writing style.. keep your blog interesting :)

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  13. For a moment, I had got confused, the photo is of lovers, but the words could easily reflect the love of a sibling too, the thread of the relation (or maybe the rakhi)..

    Admire the play of words. Beautiful! :)

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    1. You gave such a beautiful different dimension to the poem Leo!Thank you!

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  14. The mingling of souls is pure and beautiful ..
    Nice write :)

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  15. It's short, simple and sweet :)

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    1. Thank you Ruhani! I love your name!

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  16. Excellent ! Apt ! and Brilliant.

    AJ
    http://ajstates.blogspot.com

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    1. I am glad you think so! Thank you Rupertt!

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  18. i liked reading it.....thank you:)

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  19. can u provide me link of this song full??? i found this song as theme of samsung galaxy tab 3 :) thankyou.

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  20. It's so cute and heart-warming. :)

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