Serendipity at first sight!

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It was instant chemistry.I was taken by her in the first glance.She was mesmerized by the way I touched her, she later said.It was serendipity at first sight for us.

They tried to stop us.Warn us of the potential difficulties.But we were in love.Nothing else mattered.Besides they can never see how beautifully we complete each other.

Its said that love knows no boundaries and needs no language.I know why.I write what I have to say to her on her palm.And she makes sure I lip read her words.



She never missed the eyesight she never had.And her voice, was the only sound i regret not being able to hear.

Comments

  1. Sarah malikApril 13, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    beautiful :) expresses love and its divinity is such few words. loved it!

    sarah

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  2. CYNOSUREApril 14, 2012 at 1:40 AM

    that was something extremely amazing...loved it... :)

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  3. Deepa DuraisamyApril 14, 2012 at 3:33 AM

    Heavy! Sad ending but so short yet so powerful! Nicely written!

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  4. umashankarApril 14, 2012 at 7:11 AM

    Amazingly powerful clip of love and pain.

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  5. NimsrulesApril 14, 2012 at 10:55 AM

    I made my GF read this and she went gaga over me :) Thanks for writing this sensational piece!

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    1. UpasanaApril 26, 2012 at 9:35 PM

      Your comment made me smile! I am glad your gf loved it! :-)

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  6. RahulApril 14, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    :-) good stuff....although for a moment in the start,I thought it had a homosexual angle to it.....excellent stuff

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    1. UpasanaApril 26, 2012 at 9:37 PM

      Homosexual angle? It started with "him" and "her"!

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  7. the other side of meApril 14, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    Awww...the last line was simply amazing <3

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  8. AnonymousApril 14, 2012 at 7:05 PM

    amazing post!!! loved it ...:)

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  9. magiceyeApril 14, 2012 at 7:08 PM

    wah!! kya baat hai!!

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  10. UnknownApril 14, 2012 at 10:13 PM

    That's simply wonderful, well written and its sure is a work of genius.

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  11. Chetan MaheshwariApril 15, 2012 at 10:22 PM

    touching..liked it..:)

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  12. RajaApril 16, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Why does he write words on her palm?? She can't see right. She has to write words on his palm(considering she knows how to write) bcoz he can't hear. Since she can't see, he has to speak.. is he deaf by birth?? If yes, then he can't speak well.. else, he doesn't have to write words on her palm. Hope I am making sense.. correct me if I am wrong.

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  13. UnknownApril 21, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    Oh! it is so beautiful! I am speechless for once!

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  14. Amruta MarwahApril 21, 2012 at 11:10 PM

    Beautifully written.....very touching :)

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  15. Blasphemous AestheteApril 23, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    True that, reminds me of a video I saw once, it had a background track "Peaches", by New Heights, based on a similar theme.

    Just remembered it while I was reading this post of yours.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  16. Deepa DuraisamyApril 30, 2012 at 9:04 AM

    Hi Upasana,

    I only recently discovered your blog and have been hooked ever since. I would like to gift you an award in genuine appreciation, no pre-conditions attached. Just something that I feel applies to your blog. Please view http://deepa-duraisamy.blogspot.com/2012/04/and-winner-is.html for the award. Hope you like it!

    Thanks,
    Deepa.

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    1. UpasanaMay 30, 2012 at 9:05 AM

      Thank you Deepa! It got a smile on my face!

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