Friday, April 13, 2012

Serendipity at first sight!


It was instant chemistry.I was taken by her in the first glance.She was mesmerized by the way I touched her, she later said.It was serendipity at first sight for us.

They tried to stop us.Warn us of the potential difficulties.But we were in love.Nothing else mattered.Besides they can never see how beautifully we complete each other.

Its said that love knows no boundaries and needs no language.I know why.I write what I have to say to her on her palm.And she makes sure I lip read her words.



She never missed the eyesight she never had.And her voice, was the only sound i regret not being able to hear.

33 comments:

  1. beautiful :) expresses love and its divinity is such few words. loved it!

    sarah

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  2. that was something extremely amazing...loved it... :)

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  3. Heavy! Sad ending but so short yet so powerful! Nicely written!

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  4. Amazingly powerful clip of love and pain.

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  5. I made my GF read this and she went gaga over me :) Thanks for writing this sensational piece!

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    1. Your comment made me smile! I am glad your gf loved it! :-)

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  6. :-) good stuff....although for a moment in the start,I thought it had a homosexual angle to it.....excellent stuff

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    1. Homosexual angle? It started with "him" and "her"!

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  7. Awww...the last line was simply amazing <3

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  8. That's simply wonderful, well written and its sure is a work of genius.

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  9. Why does he write words on her palm?? She can't see right. She has to write words on his palm(considering she knows how to write) bcoz he can't hear. Since she can't see, he has to speak.. is he deaf by birth?? If yes, then he can't speak well.. else, he doesn't have to write words on her palm. Hope I am making sense.. correct me if I am wrong.

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  10. Oh! it is so beautiful! I am speechless for once!

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  11. Simply superb………..marvelous….
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  12. Beautifully written.....very touching :)

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  13. True that, reminds me of a video I saw once, it had a background track "Peaches", by New Heights, based on a similar theme.

    Just remembered it while I was reading this post of yours.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Ok! I haven't seen it! Will check it out!

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  14. Hi Upasana,

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    Thanks,
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    1. Thank you Deepa! It got a smile on my face!

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