Something is amiss...

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The sun rises 
And the day begins, 
Goes on to end with
Some failures and wins... 
Life goes on but, 
I wait for those few 
moments of bliss, 
A sign from you, 
Saying I am missed.. 
Lips smile but the moments  
making eyes twinkle are few,
Not much feels nice as
I am away from you!


P.s : Exams have kept me away from home, Him and blogger. :-(
As a result I have missed out on reading all your lovely blogs. Exams are still on and getting over soon.Once those are done, I will be back to where I belong! Counting days! :-)

Comments

  1. aditi kaneMay 4, 2012 at 7:26 PM

    NICE ONE !!! FROM SOMEONE INNOVATIVE AND SOMEONE MILKY. FROM SOMEONE ELSE'S ID

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  2. Blasphemous AestheteMay 4, 2012 at 9:44 PM

    Distances sometimes bring depth to relations :)

    Best of luck for exams.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. UpasanaMay 30, 2012 at 8:48 AM

      I guess it does!Thank you! My exams went well!

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  3. Colors and GraysMay 5, 2012 at 8:39 AM

    Nice poem. and oh, goodluck on your exams too...

    anyway, I recently change my template, please visit my blog sometime and I would appreciate it if you can give me some feedbacks.

    thanks

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  4. GurgaonflowerplazaMay 5, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    beauty..
    Gurgaonflowerplaza.com

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  5. RajaMay 5, 2012 at 6:18 PM

    Cute girl..

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  6. UnknownMay 6, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    Thats beautiful! well written!

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  7. Sarah malikMay 6, 2012 at 12:43 PM

    very nicely penned...distances truly makes the heart grow fonder :) good luck for ur exams!


    sarah

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  8. CookieCrumbsInc.May 8, 2012 at 7:17 PM

    I think distance really does make the heart fonder :)
    Hope you did the exams well...

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  9. CYNOSUREMay 9, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    Beautifully composed... :)
    good luck for the exams...tc... :)

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  10. obat jerawatJuly 11, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    postingan yang bagus tentang"Something is amiss..."

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