Friday, July 27, 2012

I give up...




Fights leaving bruised and hurt,
the words spoken rude and curt,
Pain grows every minute stronger,
Too much to bear any longer..
As, love seeps out 
like tiny grains of sand,
I give up
and let go of your hand...

8 comments:

  1. A girl with a scissor cutting the very bond of love and letting the other one go ,for the wind of pain is hard to hold him.
    Every word is in support of your imagination.
    Superlike.
    --Gunjan Sinha

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  2. Sometimes the only way out is to let go!
    Nice work :)

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  3. Sometimes, it is better to let go than to hold on tight. Holding on tight sometimes tightens the noose and leads to smothering of a relationship.

    Nice read,

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Letting go is a better option in this circumstance! Nice writing!

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  5. i so agree wid d ppl above..
    its best to let go sometimes
    n soon u too will understand wid time

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