I give up...

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Fights leaving bruised and hurt,
the words spoken rude and curt,
Pain grows every minute stronger,
Too much to bear any longer..
As, love seeps out 
like tiny grains of sand,
I give up
and let go of your hand...

Comments

  1. gunjan kumarJuly 27, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    A girl with a scissor cutting the very bond of love and letting the other one go ,for the wind of pain is hard to hold him.
    Every word is in support of your imagination.
    Superlike.
    --Gunjan Sinha

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  2. Confused SoulJuly 27, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    Sometimes the only way out is to let go!
    Nice work :)

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  3. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 27, 2012 at 2:19 PM

    Sometimes, it is better to let go than to hold on tight. Holding on tight sometimes tightens the noose and leads to smothering of a relationship.

    Nice read,

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Madhav MishraJuly 27, 2012 at 4:10 PM

    sad poetry? kyun?

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  5. indu chhibberJuly 27, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    Lovely,i liked a lot.

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  6. Chetan MaheshwariJuly 28, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    good one.....
    liked it..

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  7. Rahul BhatiaJuly 30, 2012 at 9:48 AM

    Letting go is a better option in this circumstance! Nice writing!

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  8. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comAugust 3, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    i so agree wid d ppl above..
    its best to let go sometimes
    n soon u too will understand wid time

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