Saturday, September 22, 2012

First date...

In the middle of a confused day,
The sort when sun and clouds 
hide and seek play,
A messaged beeped and brought out the sun,
"I shall see you at eight"
She beamed and felt a rush,
The rush of a first date!
What do I wear, was her first thought,
Before too many thoughts came pouring in a lot,
What would we talk about, how would it be?
The way he truly is, will I get to see?
Her chain of thoughts was broken 
as the clock struck an hour,
She realized looking at the clock,
Eight is not that far!
Looking dapper, flowers in hand,
He arrived not a minute late,
Checked herself out for the last time,
Wearing a lovely smile, she greeted him,
Knowing she was ready
 for her date at eight!


  1. What a warm feeling! The first date! Very nice :)

  2. Beautiful.

    Feeling well expressed.

    Superb one Upasana

  3. One can almost see her getting ready for the date.

  4. cute and an interesting read... ahh I wish for a first date soon ;;;;;;;;;;

  5. That was sweet and beautiful. :)

  6. Ah! First date and seriously, the first thought that comes to our mind is a dress. We have to impress our man. A sweet poem and when such things happen in real life, they seem like a dream...A dream come true...:)

  7. Very well crafted poetry, Upasana! The sense of expectations on first date very beautifully portrayed:)

  8. Amazing the visit was worth…

  9. This is beautiful.

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    xo Andrea


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