'Someone' to 'Anyone'..

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Fluttering heart and naughty butterflies,
Made her believe in his disguise,
He claimed and she believed,
This was the love, 
she had always conceived
Bit by bit the facade broke down,
Tears followed every fight and frown,
Breaking her trust was his final blow,
Making it easy for her to let him go,
He had turned from
any stranger to her special 'Someone',
only to go ahead and prove,
He really was her 'Anyone' !




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  1. Mohit UdhwaniSeptember 28, 2012 at 7:01 PM

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  2. Mohit UdhwaniSeptember 28, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    Small poem with greater meaning.

    Very well written.
    Very well expressed.

    It show Painful side of relationships touches the heart.

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  3. SJSeptember 28, 2012 at 7:36 PM

    well written Upasana :)

    www.styledestino.com

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  4. indu chhibberSeptember 28, 2012 at 7:54 PM

    Oh lovely-superb flow & narration,i loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. Subhrashis AdhikariSeptember 28, 2012 at 9:49 PM

    painful emotions.....nicely written

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  6. AshithaSeptember 29, 2012 at 4:31 PM

    Beautiful poem ..well-written

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  7. Always UnluckySeptember 29, 2012 at 5:11 PM

    It’s a good thing you wrote this article instead of me because I couldn’t come up with all this original content like you did. You are simply an incredible writer.
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  8. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comSeptember 30, 2012 at 10:31 PM

    from being special to becoming anyone'. that's a long n painful journey, but once d destination is reached, it's peaceful again..
    NICE WORK ;)

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  9. provoqdOctober 8, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    The journey from 'someone' to 'anyone' described nicely in this post Upasana :)
    Keep posting :)

    Regards,

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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