Irony!

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He loves me.

I believe him.

She says she loves him too.

He doesn't believe her since he found another man in her bed.

Who am I ?

I am the other woman in the "marriage".


Comments

  1. magiceyeOctober 12, 2012 at 9:39 PM

    Brilliant!

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  2. SirishaOctober 12, 2012 at 9:57 PM

    yeye I am your 150 th follower :)
    The post is thought provoking to say the least.

    http://vevisia.blogspot.in

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  3. Mohit UdhwaniOctober 13, 2012 at 8:57 AM

    6 Lines and lot so many things said.

    Liked it.

    Also its a perception post.
    Ten different people have ten different thinking for the post.


    Nice post.


    Congratulations for having 150 followers

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  4. Mohit UdhwaniOctober 13, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    Nice post.

    Perception based post : everyone will have different meaning for post.

    6 lines saying lot many things.

    Congratulations for having 150 followers :)

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  5. AJNABIOctober 13, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    Short.. Touching nd nyc poem.. Grt work..

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  6. Ritika TiwariOctober 13, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    Hehe, okay I found it a little funny :D
    Is it okay ?

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    1. UpasanaOctober 16, 2012 at 11:41 AM

      Its completely fine! I would love to know why! :-)

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  7. UnknownOctober 14, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    You have a cute space and the write up is quite mature. Took me a while to get the whole meaning. Very nice :))

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  8. AnishaOctober 18, 2012 at 7:15 PM

    She cheated on him. He cheated on her. The cycle continues..

    +Not Just My Allegories+

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  9. ekta khetanOctober 20, 2012 at 11:00 AM

    You have taken up that thing quite well Upasana.

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  10. Sri ValliOctober 21, 2012 at 1:49 PM

    It is realistic! Happening a lot now a days!..Cheating on partner has become common story....Good one Upasana...

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  11. provoqdOctober 26, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    Woahh...that 'iron'ed out quite a lot of creases in the relationship I'm sure.
    Truly ironic and nicely written Upasana.
    Keep it up :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  12. Ann Chetachukwu Ubah MDDecember 28, 2013 at 5:21 AM

    I had to really think hard. Creative design

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