An ode to my dreams..

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I weave you with my words,
I carry you in my eyes,
You make me want 
to wish for more,
beyond Earth and the skies,
Empowering me through and always,
You guide me 
in your own mysterious ways.
I hear your song and follow your lead,
I have long crossed the tiny realm of need.
I live to keep you alive or
is it the other way around, 
I do not know.
But, my dreams I tell you this,
With time and imagination,
I wish you only grow!

Comments

  1. Anubhav SharmaJune 15, 2013 at 8:02 PM

    It's really great.

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALJune 15, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    lovely composition!
    the concluding lines are well written!! :)

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  3. UnknownJune 15, 2013 at 10:39 PM

    beautiful weave..

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  4. Ankur AnandJune 16, 2013 at 7:21 PM

    Sweet one :)

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  5. Saru SinghalJune 19, 2013 at 9:18 PM

    Lovely. BTW, you meant, 'I hear your song and follow your lead'???
    Or, I am not able to grasp the meaning. Sorry, if latter is the case.

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    1. UpasanaJune 21, 2013 at 7:50 AM

      Hey Saru! Thank you for your comment! And it actually was a typo error from my end that has been rectified! :)

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  6. UpasanaJune 21, 2013 at 7:51 AM

    Thank you Sri! :)

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  7. Mohit UdhwaniJune 25, 2013 at 10:23 PM

    Good one. As always, you are best at expressing. Personifying dreams is something out of box for me. Thumps up :)

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  8. UnknownJuly 12, 2013 at 12:51 AM

    nice... liked it... Hi friend, I’d like to invite you to this contest.

    As a start of "IndiBlosp". I'm hosting a contest on 55 Fiction. It would be very Interesting. I'll be very happy if you contribute your writing in this contest "55 Fictionist Contest" you can share it to your friends and fellow bloggers... take care...

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