Tuesday, September 17, 2013

The hope song...


Hearing the song of a silent heart..
Dreamy eyes lost far away, 
For her it was yet another pensive day. 
She reflects and ponders, 
Decides and then wonders. 
Uneven cobbled roads, 
Travellers on both in hordes. 
She stands at the start, 
Contemplating with a silent heart, 
She doesn't know where she wants to go, 
Hopes that the path she takes directs the flow. 
She aspires to not be wrong,
If only it was easy to hear the hope song!

6 comments:

  1. Hi Upanasa, the way you have concluded the poem is very nice. However, I'd like to suggest that go back to the penultimate line and check the usage. 'She aspires to not be wrong' doesn't sound correct usage to me. Leaving it to your judgement.

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  2. Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And looked down one as far as I could
    To where it bent in the undergrowth;
    ...
    I shall be telling this with a sigh
    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.

    ~Sir Frost

    I hope he gives your heart an answer, and also the ear to listen to that hope song :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. Beautiful song..I find it touching as it presents my present condition..I also hope that the decision by me is not wrong even if it's unconventional. :)

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