Saturday, March 17, 2012

Aiming for the moon...




A beautiful dream in the eyes,
Short prayer on the lips,
I am aiming for the moon,
Giving the stars a miss....
I hope and believe
my dream will come true,
I see you next to me
and my belief is stronger as,
One of my dreams are you...

 

34 comments:

  1. Must say your every poem is better than a last one.

    :)

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  2. Moon- someday we will meet :)
    wah.. nicely expressed.

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  3. I felt this poem two different ways.

    A childhood dream to capture the moon... ah. we all do have that when we r little. innocence personified.

    second is more personal. to meeting someone whose abode is the stars itself. heavenly yearning n memories.

    thank u...

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    1. You come up with such beautiful interpretations! I am in awe!Thank you!

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  4. Great minds think alike :)

    I think exactly the same way about my 'Dream Girl' <3

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  5. Nicely expressed... :)
    its good to dream big...warna chhote target achieve karne mein maza nhi aata... ;)

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  6. Beautiful poem Upasana!! :) really well written and the shortness of this poem is the essence of it!

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  7. Upasana - I am feeling inspired reading your post .. one shouldn't be afraid to aim big in life !! Cheers to your dreams !!

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  8. Such an awesome poem :).
    Short and sweet :D.
    Touched my heart :).
    Lovely!

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  9. Nice message. Beautiful poem. Always aim bigger. :)

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  10. It is lovely to see hope bubbling over in this poem :-)

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