Aiming for the moon...

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A beautiful dream in the eyes,
Short prayer on the lips,
I am aiming for the moon,
Giving the stars a miss....
I hope and believe
my dream will come true,
I see you next to me
and my belief is stronger as,
One of my dreams are you...

 

Comments

  1. Mohit UdhwaniMarch 17, 2012 at 8:53 AM

    Must say your every poem is better than a last one.

    :)

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  2. AmitAagMarch 17, 2012 at 9:56 AM

    Very nice Upasana!

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  3. Dee..March 17, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    Moon- someday we will meet :)
    wah.. nicely expressed.

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  4. Vinay Leo R.March 17, 2012 at 11:03 AM

    I felt this poem two different ways.

    A childhood dream to capture the moon... ah. we all do have that when we r little. innocence personified.

    second is more personal. to meeting someone whose abode is the stars itself. heavenly yearning n memories.

    thank u...

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    1. UpasanaMarch 18, 2012 at 8:49 PM

      You come up with such beautiful interpretations! I am in awe!Thank you!

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  5. RajaMarch 17, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Great minds think alike :)

    I think exactly the same way about my 'Dream Girl' <3

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  6. CYNOSUREMarch 17, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    Nicely expressed... :)
    its good to dream big...warna chhote target achieve karne mein maza nhi aata... ;)

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  7. Owais Ashraf PhotographyMarch 17, 2012 at 1:10 PM

    Beautifully written

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  8. AnonymousMarch 17, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    short & sweet !! very nice

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  9. Jen..The Butterfly EffectMarch 18, 2012 at 1:04 AM

    Beautiful poem Upasana!! :) really well written and the shortness of this poem is the essence of it!

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  10. Prasoon KhareMarch 18, 2012 at 2:34 AM

    Superb piece of writing :)

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  11. magiceyeMarch 18, 2012 at 7:34 AM

    very nicely expressed

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  12. SangrywordsMarch 18, 2012 at 12:15 PM

    Upasana - I am feeling inspired reading your post .. one shouldn't be afraid to aim big in life !! Cheers to your dreams !!

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  13. Princess PooMarch 18, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    Such an awesome poem :).
    Short and sweet :D.
    Touched my heart :).
    Lovely!

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  14. Akshay Kumar GMarch 18, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    Nice message. Beautiful poem. Always aim bigger. :)

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  15. PranitaMarch 18, 2012 at 8:39 PM

    Lovely poem! :)

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  16. Rishi BMarch 18, 2012 at 11:04 PM

    sweet

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  17. AnneMarch 19, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    It is lovely to see hope bubbling over in this poem :-)

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